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Post by WeGetSignal on Apr 14, 2009 23:38:43 GMT -5
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Post by foil on Apr 15, 2009 1:12:30 GMT -5
I watched it in Resonance - keyword: watched. I know not to play songs there, but regardless, I can get a pretty good idea of what a file is like by watching it.
Your patterns didn't make a whole lot of sense, for example, the 16th runningmen that go into the 16th trills...what the hell were those going to? I didn't hear either of those patterns. Everything was pretty random, and sometimes I didn't even hear the notes that you put in there. Your jumps were inconsistent. Layering was inconsistent.
I'm not trying to rip on you. I'm well aware this is your second file and you'll definitely get better with time. Most people literally paint their first files with all colors of notes because they have no idea what they're doing. At least it seems you have correct BPMs and used the standard 4th, 8th and 16th notes. It seems that way though...I'd have to open this up in the editor to see if everything worked out.
I still have yet to play that other file, but I doubt it's any better than this one.
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nois
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Post by nois on Apr 15, 2009 4:25:19 GMT -5
3g... nice file but there is a very strange change in the pattern in the stream that kinds of mindfucks me... but i suck remember
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Post by WeGetSignal on Apr 15, 2009 11:38:50 GMT -5
I did think about those trills, and really, they were simply a product of my wanting to get the fuck done with this simGoddamnfile
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